It's a wonderful haiku that is based on the famous story of Don Quixote.I think it is a traditional and sophisticated way of making haikus to use classic literature.Anyway I'm very impressive. Thank you.
eh, oui malheureusement t'as raison...disparue la justice..globalisée son manque...bises
Sorry,I'm very impressed, not impressive.And I think this haiku poses the question of how to use a season word in a haiku.I tried to translate it into Japanese.Here is the link:http://blog.goo.ne.jp/delfini2
thanks for your comments winter moon... well that's true... the question here is how not to use a season word... frequently I don't use one... yet if this composition is still an haiku or not «est une autre paire de manches» ... :))
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